Friday, 13 September 2019

The Egg

2 comments:

  1. Hi Eyziah i'm Kayla from Te Hapara School. I thought your writing was very descriptive and creative but could you tell me why you made this and what was it for? Nonetheless great work happy blogging!

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  2. Hi Ezyiah,
    I think your writing is
    really interesting next you could
    probably add some more detail
    and tell us why you chose to write
    about this topic
    good work
    -Mereana

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Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

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