Hi Eyziah i'm Kayla from Te Hapara School. I thought your writing was very descriptive and creative but could you tell me why you made this and what was it for? Nonetheless great work happy blogging!
Hi Ezyiah, I think your writing is really interesting next you could probably add some more detail and tell us why you chose to write about this topic good work -Mereana
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Hi Eyziah i'm Kayla from Te Hapara School. I thought your writing was very descriptive and creative but could you tell me why you made this and what was it for? Nonetheless great work happy blogging!
ReplyDeleteHi Ezyiah,
ReplyDeleteI think your writing is
really interesting next you could
probably add some more detail
and tell us why you chose to write
about this topic
good work
-Mereana